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This was originally just a short little practice smut to see if I could get back into writing lemons.
And then it became a short little practice in writing uke America.

And then it turned into this plotless 5000 word...I don't even know. Romance drivel.

Anyway, I beyond love the idea that America and Canada have a very even, very fair relationship. I also love the idea that they're each other's most important person and that there are no possible people in their lives who could even come close to competing. I ALSO really love the idea of America not only being on the bottom, but being perfectly willing and open to it (although I really think he'd only be open to it privately, with Mattie, and would act as though he was a total top around the other nations). And having multiple orgasms. Mattie spoils his indulgences, what can I say?

I wanted to keep this going, honestly, but I got tired, and I realized it was all pretty dull and boring, so I wrapped it up, even though I hate the ending (but I can't imagine Alfred would want to do much BUT sleep, really...). I plan on going through the 30lemons prompts for LiveJournal, though, so hopefully writing this will help my lemon-writing abilities flourish.

Also, I just realized I almost ALWAYS write in 3rd person limited, with Alfred's POV stressed. I need to write more lemons from Mattie's perspective. Especially when Mattie's topping. Hmm...

And I'm sorry I write such long sentences. I like long things. :icondurrhurrplz:
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-cue intense nosebleed- 

this...
i have no words-